Animal Eye

ANIMAL EYE

Animal Eye Novel

Animal Eye: A GameLit Adventure

(Animal Instinct Book 1)

ISBN: 978-1646334063

ASIN: B088WRK6TX

Paperback: 694 pages



AUTHOR: Cindy Koepp.


   My interest in Animal Eye isn’t necessarily the same as what Cindy sees in her story and even though I’m talking to readers of Bear Publications about the story here, my interest isn't mainly about making a sale. Mainly I want to talk about how an original idea can open up a market that not many Christians are writing in--but which we can contribute to in a creative and original way.


By the way, Animal Eye is a GameLit adventure, though also could qualify as LitRPG.



   In Animal Eye, Khin May and Jake are playtesters checking out the conversion of a popular kids’ game to an adult version. Khin May becomes Ahva, a feisty crow who belongs to Osse, an archer and herbalist. Jake plays Nagheed, a Nethanyan mountain shepherd, who belongs to Baron Rafayel Dorcas.
    They experience the
Virtual Reality game as the characters and learn how to do things the animals can do. Ahva learns to fly and mimic almost any sound with practice, and Nagheed can track targets by their scent and run fast enough to keep pace with a horse.



   As the game progresses through a variety of quests, they advance their skills while learning the unusual history of the world.

    They and their humans gather resources to stop a priestess bent on creating laughing maniacal killers to fulfill an old grudge to destroy all civilizations but her own



    What interests me though is the convention of video games for players in the imaginary GameLit setting to be humans or maybe demi-humans or intelligent aliens. Such players may have animals that help them, especially in medieval or ancient world settings. But in Animal Eye, the situation is flipped. Humans, who are important to the story for sure, are NPC (Non-Player Characters) played by an advanced AI to the point where they seem as real as the PC (Player Character) protagonists. But in the imaginary game of Animal Eye, a human player would always play an animal, never a human being or demi-human or alien.



An Original GameLit story: Animals Stars to Open a Gateway      



   By putting animal stars out front, I think this game can succeed in being kid-friendly and serve as an easy introduction to GameLit and LitRPG stories for readers who may not otherwise be interested in these genres. Plus, the original design for the imaginary game behind Animal Eye would be a lot of fun to play if it were a real game. Imagine learning to fly like a bird and seeing through their eyes--or seeing smells while playing as a dog (yes, this his how the game actually works!) or having other abilities animals have that people don't.



   I think this story can also appeal to hard-core fans of LitRPG and GameLit books, even though it doesn't hit a mature rating. A good story is a good story.



A GameLit Genre Warning: Gateways Open Both Ways



Of course by opening a connection to a genre with only a small amount of kid-friendly content, a genre that may be hostile to Christianity, there’s always the danger that connecting an innovative story to that world will not only provide a gateway for people who would not normally consider a story like Cindy's, it could aslo lead inquisitive young Christians to start out reading works like Cindy’s and follow the genre into it's "mature content" areas. Yes, that’s a possible outcome–we should acknowledge that possibility and guard against it. In particular Christian parents should be aware that the GameLit and LitRPG genres contain some "adult" content and young people should be appropriately warned. Discernment is, of course, key. 



If any aspiring writers reading this would be interested in writing a story that’s similar to Animal Eye or would like to work with Cindy and I contributing to a sequel story that’s part of her game-featuring-animals-type story setting (though not with her same characters), we might be interested in that, too. Contact us.



Find the best LitRPG and GameLit series and stories with us!



Travis Perry

Evil Mastermind of Bear Publications :)

REVIEWS


This is a fairly family friendly LitRPG story with gamers playing a new VRMMO where players can be animals instead of people. The multi narrative story has one player as a dog with the Protector class, another as a crow, and a bear companion. It's a fairly slice of life story, where you follow the characters as they play their animal characters, get quests and become immersed in the game world, and go on adventures. It's kinda like if the animals from that movie Homeward Bound went on an RPG adventure.

On the game mechanic side of things, the characters gain XP and level for learning their appropriate animal behaviors, solving quests like finding an owner, and problem solving using their limited animal skills and abilities. There are levels, skills, stats, HP, and all the normal stuff. There is also an interesting use of morale in the story. With the animals able to lower or raise a target's morale with growls or other actions. Morale impacts a target's behavior and their ability to fight effectively. There are also notifications and XP rewards based on what an animal would perceive or do. The story does a good job of gamifying what it would be like to play as an animal.


Overall, a decent read if you feel like reading about animal main characters or want something you can read with your kids.

--Animal MCs

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